Wow this was a really good poem. It has a lot of meaning in it! Can you give me some advice, read "shes mine" if you can!

~ very nice
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit ^_^

Good poem, it was an interesting topic that you picked.

Five/Five

P.S. Thank you for your comment on my poem, thank you for the five, a few people must not like me because i got a low rating on probably what i thought was my second best poem. "Gods Lost Angel" will always be my favorite poem ever.