i loved it i could picture everything in my mind as i read it keep upt he good work. nikki

Good Job I liked it a lot!

really good i used to dream of a place like that keep it up

lily kit

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I could really picture myself in my neverland listening to birds chirp and bees hum...and a waterfall too! Gosh, that was beautiful. So many times I need to escape somewhere too. Very nice write, keep on writing.
SatuzKa