Goodbye love

Goodbye love,goodbye happiness
goodbye dreams,goodbye bliss
he left me and broke my heart
and the pain is unbearable being apart
my hands shake,i feel paralyzed
no more can i look into your eyes
cause all i see is the person i love but got hurt
you lifted me high and dropped me in the dirt
in my life people have come and gone
this time i thought that you'd be the one
i guess you didn't feel the same way
without you i have to face life lone day after day
but know my heart forever will be yours
and i will wait for the day to see you walk through my door
to wrap your arms around me and get me back
to have you realize what you lack
you need me and i know i need you
i will always love you with a love so true
never forget me, i will always be there
i will always listen and will always care

i didn't spend much time on it and its not the best...but i was wondering if i just have low self esteem about my poems...so i just thought....go for it so please comment and tell me what i need to do better on and what i do good on