i don't understand it very much but the way in which it was put together and sounds, it very sweet. good work

Aww very cute indeed. I loved it. :) Take care!

how beautiful and creative. i love this poem Rua, great job-5/5

God Bless
Love Heather.

THANK you mates ,am really thank full for all of you.

Peace,
Darla

This comment was from my Aunty Juliet:

HiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiGood for u, for the three BALLOONS, I like it , it was realy a very nice poem,

good luck witha lot of XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

this comment was from aunty Meme :)

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congratulation....that was very sweet & cute ....just like you!!!!!!!!!!!!

Excellent , i did vote for you , good luck

menhel

Hello Darla!

I think that the metaphore about a ballon and a life and how you are going to bring people around them who are like them but never the same. I think it is a wonderful poem...perhaps i am reading too much into it.

Either way

Five/Five

P.S. Thank you for your comments always...it is such a great thing to hear from you. I forgive you this one time for not saying hello ;) hehe just kidding.

Lots of love,
Darky

Wow, very creative and "deep." It was fun to read this poem, cuz it's like so different from other poems, and so creative. I enjoyed it. Definitly 5/5.
~SatuzKa~

Thank you SatuzKa : ) i had Fun writing this poem too,coz i think its fun starting from the title ! lol

CHeers,
Peace

Very original. Never red a poem about balloons before. I like it though :)

I've just read a poem about three balloons. basically a poem about three trivial objects. the fact that i've now read the poem twice speaks volumes of the talent you have for keeping the reader engrossed, regardless of the subject matter. well done.

Thank you Jay,I love your poems mate !

awww i loved that poem so0o much! it was sooo good.5/5 wonderful. keep it up

much love
shannon

Sweet of you Shannon : )
I will Keep it on the LoW trust me ; )

much much Respect,
Rua Francis.

you are soo great rua! i could actually see the balloons floating by!! keep it up!! 5/5

oh Lindsay,am happy that you could
see those Balloons lol,Thanks