~ very very nice
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

whoooa! i especially liked this one. I like the high school romance idea, it's so sweet. and good job with the rhyming too!
~Satuzka
p.s 5/5

oh wow.. that poem was truly beautiful. the first verse and the chourus kind of reminded me of spider man.... just some random info there... nehoo, it showed how highshcool groups and popularity don't really matter.. oh wow that was a magnificent poem! keep writing new material!

vedali

wonderful poem. just amazing.

GREAT job! Very well-written. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

-Kate

P.S.Thanks so much for your comments on my poetry. They were honestly appreciated!

this was so so sweet:D i loved it. brilliant work
~Freak~

Omg! Seriously, I really loved this song! The rhyming is perfect and I love the whole idea. I love singing and writing songs, and I think this one is awesome! Keep it up!

Brilliant! I absolutely loved that. You did an amazing job. It's so beautiful. Keep writing and take care.