WOW! This is good. I really like it, and I can relate to it very well. Keep writing and I promise you'll get better. Oh and thanks for the comments on my poem, it helps

wow this is amazing. i luv it. eep it up^**^

thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. it means a lot to me~!~
thanks
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nida

~*~awww sad but really good, oh and spankumz for ur comment on my poem, i appreciated it~*~

instead of asking how bad you are rather ask how good you are.... with that out the way i thought it was pretty amazing, and don't worry keep writing you'll get better with practice.....not that you aren't good as it is

Lol, your not bad at all. work on the ryming scheme thats all. the flow is good. i enjoyed this one, good job!

This is good, some capitalization wouldve been nice, i like the last four lines, those are good.