Comments : With No chance But By Choice

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ nice and expressive
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by shenoa

    this poem is so true. i know exactly how you feel. i love this, i love how much i can relate.. favorate lines...
    "Why can't you be there to lift me up?
    When I'm the one who catches you when you fall"
    those were so, wow... great job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    still confused.....grr.....whats he doing to you? i mean, you're in love i see but is he not or ?....well i love the words, esp.
    Always being pushed to the edge
    Another day another scar
    Looking upon your Imperfections
    To say how lovely they really are

    b/c i've always believed to love someone you have to see their imperfections perfectly...-5

    love Heather.