wonderful.. beautiful... amazing.. I can go on and on.. this poem was very sad and I just loved it.. keep it up, another ~5~

Great 5/5! Hugs

Sad, grim, and poignant.

Hey, I'm glad you liked my Haiku! Since you don't know what a Haiku is im going to tell you. A Haiku is a poem with three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables.

P.s Nice poem..very interesting!..Keep up the totally awesome peoms! Alot of your poems are so deep..you can see the emotions you had while writing them..which is totally awesome 'cause with alot of poets you can't see that in there poems sadly. So yea Keep it up, you totally have an talent..and it seems like a hobbie too:P..C'ya

Good job keep it up!

nice poem....u got talent there. keep writing

wow again excellent 5/5 ur a really good writter! espec liked the line....A simple pawn, used like a toy.
well done, thanks for ur comments and take care
xxxLoUxxx

this is a great poem! i love it! keep it up! :) take care. keep your head up!

wow..i really like it...i get it...except im a chick but ya still....it had good flow keep it up