Hey baby gurl! I love you, I like this poem but I don't really understand it. Do you feel bad about something? I hope I didn't do sumthin wrong. Hope I see you soon. Love your baby boy

~ good lines, kristal, 1st poem i'm impressed from, in the past few days.
opposing second line with every line, nice way to express omnipresent duality in life. write on, this one was a special poem to me. thank you very much. :) wish i could give it 10/5, sincerely.
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Hey, I love the idea behind this one, you wrote it so beautifully, thanx for your comment, keep it up xxx