Comments : Gone

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Great poem...x

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    thanks x

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Ahem, firstly chikidee, brilliant poem, but I'm sorry for how you feel hun. I don't really know anything about you but you mean the world to Toni and you mean alot to me too. I'm not sure what's brought this on, but that's obviously because you hide it. Just so you know though, you don't have to pretend with me. I'll accept you anyway you come, even if you're discombobulated :)
    ANyway, just so ya know, I'm here for you!
    Take good care of yourself. Head up.
    Always in my prayers. All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    thank u hun :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Aw! Oliver, we're all here for you. Hopefully, your time to be "gone" isn't for a long time. I know you may wish for it, I'm sure a lot of us do, but its not like we won't heal from things like this eventually. This poem was truly sad and I could almost feel the misery from it. Your depression radiates. I'm sorry that you may feel like this though!! I'm here if you need to talk.

    I'm sorry!

    <33,

    Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    oh hun thats a sad poem :( its good tho, real good. u can always talk to me bout netin, i no we avnt been talking that long but im always here,
    and never forget you have someone who loves you eternally (toni o course)
    big hug from ellie
    xoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    thank you you guys :) all that made me smile :) it really means a lot to know that there are people who care:) thanks xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    you're a really good poet i like your work.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~