I'm so sorry for your loss! I hope you are ok! Vote and comment on some of my stuff if you ever get the chance.

Hey baby!!! Thanks for signing me up today, I'm so sorry I haven't been able to get a hold of you, I wish I could see you right now!!! I LOVE YOU!!! Your poem is really great, I really do like it, I love you baby, Love, your AJ

i love the bittersweet tone of this poem...and the flow is quite consistent good job