man i love your work! this is another really nice poem. i can see your emotion when u write this. its really good!

5/5!

Hi there...i like this poem...i wish i could rhyme...u should check out some of my other poems if u have time...n a comment would be nice ^_^ my poems r short i can't rite long poems. well later bye bye

Very well written 5*** from me. I hope she realizes what a good man she lost. If you two don't get back together you will find someone that desearves you! You sound very sweet, and caring! Keep writing and keep up the good work!
~Krystle

Loved it:) You are so talented. Keep it up:)