gd 5/5

~ nice one
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

well done very good for a short poem
I love the line:
But I've nothing much to offer
There's nothing much to take
I'm alone and so easy to break
good job keep it up ... 5/5

cute n sweet poem i luv it

cute. very good. keep it up.

Hey Septmeber Spring, I just wanted to check out one of your poems and thank you for voting and leaving a comment on mine. Anyways, I've checked out some of them and I like how you can make them short but so full of emotion at the same time. Keep up that awsome work and continue to write!
-Rose

good poem I liked it. especially the beginning..
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

can you check out some of my stuff plz?? thanks!!

Wow, well done that was a very good poem, keep up the good writing :D love katie xx

nice poem.......hpe u relaly do find ur loved 1 .ur so sweet and passionate in ur poems...

I liked this one 4/5

Hmm, I think that should be a bit longer because the message in the end is so meaningful, so you should put more effort into the end...But, i did like the poem, it was cute. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

Aww, how sweet. :-p