my god...it gave me chills ...your a wonderful poet...and i understand all the emotions ...i'm a atempted suicider..it brought back that night which freaked me out so much. you honestly have a way w/ words...keep it up!

beautiful and well written poem ... it is very sad and shows your true feelings .... 5/5

omg . . . wow . . that was incredible, it flowed really well, and was so great, just wow, i really loved it, great job, im puttin u on my favorites

Wow I don't know what to say that was so well done! Exellent Job!

aawww hun that was really sad.......but a great poem, stay strong i know its hard......if ya need to talk i'll be here =)......gave it a 5

Great poem!!! Keep up the great work!!!!

wow! ur poems are sooooo sad! i felt like crying! God Bless You! your an awesome writer!!

another one of ur poems that made meeh cry *tear*

hey
im sorry i do not mean to judge you at all im sorry 4 all the people that has taken their own life but we all are killing ourselfs each day but we just dont know it and other people are killing us to by hatefull words and thoughts that was an amazing poem keep up the good work

Such a well written tragedy! I really liked the passion you convey in this! Loved these lines:

"I died long ago
I suffered for years
My death was slow
Now I feel nothing"

Adding you to my favorites~Holly

wow! i loved it! ur a great writer!!!

*~peace and love~*

Wow that was so true. It felt like u were writing about me i completely felt every word of that. You are truly amazing, i hate that u feel so sad. This poem nearly made me cry..wow...
take car eof urself hun please!
xoxoxxoxoxoxo

To tell ya the truth i cried.. beautifuly written, i feel as if you were almost writing about me 5/5 your an awesome poet and keep up the good writing

5/5. I was close to this. Such a great poem. Well done!!.