*tear* *hug* <3 <3 <3

why the 3? whoever gave such a low rating obviously has no general sense of knowledge for your wonderful usage of words--such a sad poem but of course i found it wonderful...all except the casually used ending however still a 5

with love,
Heather.

~ excellent write
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

I don't know, but it sounds to me like she is dating someone. Hey, she's got a few years. Wait your turn it will come. Just be patient and pray. I'll be praying for you on this issue as well.
e-mail me. Anne

wow. you've really given meaning to my poem, Power of Words. you don't know how powerful those words really are when read by others. i'm always here for you. LYMTAB, God bless and take care. ciao~lyn

The way you feel sounds so familiar :) Beautiful write! Just be patient, God will give you the right girl in His time. I'll ttyl.

That was an amazing poem! It was sad but very well done! If u would check out some of mine sometime! Thanx and Take Care! Brooke

i liked this one, keep up th egood work. Check out some of my stuff when you get time.

A lot of emotion in this poem. I am guessing it was first writen as a song with the chorus repeated. But anyways I like it. Take care.

Jesse

5/5

Wow! Excellent poem, Lipton! I really enjoyed it. My favorite part was where you wrote:"Until the End of Time I’ll love you,
Until the End of Time I’ll stand,
Waiting here, with open arms,
Waiting on the sand..."

It was beautiful.

Beautifully written Lipton.Very honest and full of emotion. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Take care & God bless you!