Comments : Dealing with my mind

  • 19 years ago

    by Jordan

    I just wanted to say thank you. You wrote me such nice things! If you want you can email me too... tipsieturtleme@yahoo.com...thanks again! p.s I really liked this poem. Very heartfelt!

  • 19 years ago

    by jenn

    Great write. i really enjoy your work, You are very talented and have a unique style. Great job.
    *Jenn*

  • 19 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Nice! Your poems give a really clear indication of what you feel! ur awesome!
    Sammi
    p.s thank you sooooooo much for commenting on Midnight's slave, I was wondering why no one was! cheers talk soon!

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    i was a little confused at first. but i get it now haha. nice poem. i think it is great. you have a way with words. Much Luv

  • 19 years ago

    by Mike

    Sometimes people can say alot of nasty stuff.. but at this site there alot of girls in that position you seriously shouldn't listen to them cause i know your strong enough.. just keep on trying to deal with it because sooner or later your going to be very sucessful in all of your talents and i know your poetry is one of them :-D so ignore what they say cause alot of people are going to talkshit about you, you know.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ally xo

    thankx that really made me smile

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    Hey! Omg we haven't talked in forever. This is a really good poem. No my friend-ryan- didn't die. But he leaves for like Iraq soon and Im really sad. Well email me k? Tipsieturtleme@yahoo.com!
    ~Much Love~
    Jordan-Paige

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholle

    this is a really good poem, keep it up! please comment back :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kisa

    I think it would have been more effective if it ryhmed, not bad.

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    all i have is the pain
    i do not want to seek it
    **try changing it to
    all i have is the pain
    i do not seek it **
    but its an awesomely written POem
    loved it
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    I saw your name and thought about reading another one of your poems.This one is truly sensational.Really good writing.

    Your friend
    Robert Flores aka Switchblade