this subject is overly used, please dont be offended by me but i do believe you could do better like you stated...so i'll check out more.

with love,
Heather.

I liked the poem and i think it was a good poem and i really enjoyed it and there is a lot of things that seeemed to be used a lot in most of the poems that are around here.

Don't take offense to it but i enjoyed the poem.

Five/Five

And i will take the time to say...Oh well poems are poems! hehehe Good job! Very nice poem! 5! Keep it up!

^_^ V ~Kady~

oh thanks for commenting on one of mine! byee!