i liked this one. mainly because it has alot of personal meaning to me in my life right now. im glad i read it!

Mike

a really sweet poem. keep writing! cant wait to read more. xxx

aw, this ones sweet, ^_^

Okay well that was a good poem but this part
"We went out night"
doesnt make sense?
Also sore should be soar .
But anyways great job 4/5.

Another wonderful poem!! I am sooo running out of things to say....