WOW Maybeth that was awsome!! That last stanza was a wonderful way to end the poem! I'm in shock! Definatley one of your best....I'm sure relationships are very painful and very hard to get over but matbeth you are an amzain girl, a wonderful poet, and very strong! Keep your head up and hopefully things will turn out alright!
5/5
~Chelsey~

love this so much emotion keep it up

awesome poem i understand what it's saying exactly. so great job it's a five.

wonderful written poem!

great job hun! awsome poem and very well written!
Keep up the fantastic work!!!
~Lia Jnell