good poem well written

i wanted to tell you to be strong and strong but saw you writing it at the ends of your poem : )

you wrote the problem and the cure
although its sad ,too sad to know
that our dearest close people would
do bad things to us ! i know how
you feel girl : (

Keep On Trying to forget ,OK?
the only thing you can do is to be
better than him, in everything
even if happened and you had your
own family ,you just have
to be better : )

Take care

much Respect,
Rua Francis.

you go girl- i love how you wrote that- i am praying for you though i dont know who you are- i how you will emotionally heal soon

that was good, I dont really lk my dad either. thanx for commenting on my poem. 5/5!

Very sad yet touching...good work!