Very good poem, well done, I really liked the flow of this one, stick around even if its just so a sadarse like me has someone to chat too much love katie! xxxx 5/5 xxxx

~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Your a great writer, if you ever want someone to talk to, my email and screen name are on my page. much love, johnny

The poem was ok these changes might make it better.
line 2 (i'm pretty) not I was, (have) not had had.
line 6 (seem) not seen.
line 8 you need an (I'm) waiting.
line 12 needs wouldn't
line 16 needs on
Other than my sugestons Witch my or may not work. the poem had great feeling.