Hey big sis...this is good...im glad i got ya on the site...lotz of pplz like you ;) hehe...this is a great poem...i can relate to this..keep it up and take carez..xoxox
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Great poem, very deep.....it moved me.....keep em' coming......

Great job. I really liked your word choice and the originality of the poem. Keep it up.
-Kate