Ok, your not flowing through it, but you are a very loving person, I liked your comment about mine, it was cool. Your girlfriend is a very lucky person. Good luck to you guys. ; )!

aw sweet!! good poem keep it up.

check out some of my featured poems. and if you read my poem ROSE i'll check out 2 of your~!!~
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nida

awww thats soo cute!!! Good job, short yet expressive. Loved it

short but i loved it

Good poem! I can tell how much you like this girl!! keep it up!!

Nicely done flow it more and you'll be a god at this....too bad your taken

Awww!!!!.... i love it.. very cute!!... n u seem like u have a g/f... man this sucks.. ur taken =[ lol ttul bi xoxo

Nice poem. i liked it. wish my bf would write a poem for me like this poem u wrote for ur gf.

Took me back in time when love is expressed so purely...when love seems so raw...when poems were very simple and yet powerful...love this, very sweet again!