Hey! that was a really great poem! I can definately relate to you! I am always here if you wanna talk to someone! so hit me up sometime if you need to!
-karlee

Always a pleasure to read your poems they are so amazing and very deep.. you have a amazing talent glad to see something new of yours five all the way

Wow great poem, You use some really good words in your poem which make them much more interesting to read I really enjoyed reading keep writing :D x

This is another amazing poem. This has also been written brilliantly. There is nothing left to say except 5/5. Love Emma xxx

i love it!

I think living in your mind is the most torturous place to live....good luck
Great Poem

Dam dude, i'm impressed, i've read a couple of yours now, and i like what i'm seeing, keep it up

Dire, powerful, and more angry than numb. For some reason I just have to say "Rage, rage against the dying of the Light". Sometimes Dylan Thomas has some incredible wisdom.

Wow! deep poem! i especially liked the second stanza - A sentence unformed, A thought left behind - very good indeed! xxxLoUxxx

You share alot of emotions within your words...i really enjoyed reading this poem! well done!
luv em