aww. :'( it made me cry. so sad. if you ever need to talk, i'll listen.. very nice poem
much love,
sydney

~ nice poem, friend. very nice
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit :(

Sad poem! It really touched my heart. got a new poem called bad day today! if u wanna read it. take care. manda :)

Awwwe Hun <3 Parents can be the biggest of bastar!ds sometimes. Be strong aye = Im always here if you wanna talk or need a friend.

Luffuuls You
--;; Kalah

(ps: sorry about the delay in commenting back) <3

oMg..Hun dat woZ a gUd..poem!! hopE everyFinz allrite mWWaazz im alwaYz herE. :)

Great work. I love it 2. I was startin to cry. I feel the same way.Thanx for commentin on mine 2.

You should never ever end your life no matter how hard life may seem, this was very sad. Especially the last lines. I hope everythings going okay. The poem itself was pretty well written and I thought the rhyming was pretty good too. Take care, keep on writing and Happy easter!
SatuzKa

How unhappy this poem is, a trace of regret in there as well. Great write!! -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

really sad i hope your ok feel free to email me if u wana chat!
lilkit x

wow...........

You have a really good talent for writing keep at it. I really enjoy reading your poems. I can really relate to this one in a wierd twisted kind of way. another 5/5 from me.

I like the rhyme scheme.

Expressive.

I don't know what else to say.

Honestly, not much more to say, well written, emotional....well done.

wonderful poem, very insightful and I can feel ur emotion in the words. Uve got the talent.

good but sad 5/5

Whoa. Absolutly amazing work hon. Hold strong ok? Suicide isnt the answer as much as it can seem like it is sometimes, Im here for you, dont ever forget that!
-xx-

nice job

what a wonderful poem.

glad you could get out your thoughts and feelings - better out than in.

Wow! This poem really touched my heart.......my best friend is depressed too and so I think I can understand you a little,little bit....so if you ever want to talk to somebody I#ll be there for you! Ok?
So don't give up even if you think hell is on earth!!!

Thats really sad!!! If u really feel this way maybe u should get sum help!!! not 2 be mean, but no1 should feel that bad and lonley in life!!! hunnychild, maybe you should think about getting sum profational help.

Hey there,
Omg!.. it just sends chills down my spine.. you are very talented...Every line has its own meaning..every word is placed perfectly..wow.. a truly great piece of writing.
Monique