Very sweet poem and nice flow!

take care

Im speechless great job

Nicely flowing! VERY SWEET! Tess xoxo

I liked dat a lot, it had a good rhythm (i dunno if i spelled dat right, my english isn't perfect but you get the pick ) .........= )

Nicely written good job

This ones nice too. im ganna add u to my favs. nice job

WELL I LIKE IT AND YOU STUPID FOR THIS ONE LINE " I CAN HIT THAT ALL NITE " LOL YOU CRAZY BUT IT'S GOOD I REALLY DO LIKE THEM I HOPE YOU COMMENT EACH N EVERY POEM OF MINE

Ur poems are sweet especially the 1 were u want to hit it all nite!!!lol

Hey great poem. you write very well.

I like this one as well. You kill me with your great talent.

I feel this wonderful thing
that would never be replaced by bling
our love will sing
your body is just right
I can hit that all night

I really love this verse alot

Lolz at first thought it was a funny poem..good job...5/5

Well written poem.. i like alot!

Cute poem. it really flowss.

Omg love dis poem