I absolultely loved this. I'm usually not into the whole pattern thing but I adored this. Good Job

cool poem. great job... awesome...

SWEET!!!!! that was awesome. im @ school, so i cant read my poem. i really apriciate it. really. i do. but ill check on it when i get home. IM SO EXCITED! anyways, i gotta go to class. ill talk to you later! amor siempre, nancy

wow this was really deep simple language and yet i had to re read it to understand the full meaning well done it was amazing thank you so much for your comment it was soo nice of you and is much appreciated x x x take care x x x luv jen x x x

love it, great job

Wow yet ANOTHER great poem by you. This is my fav poem by you sofar. Keep it up.5* Much Luv,
Amanda

Saw your comment on my poem so thought i would check yours out. This was fantastic! Not weird at all, I can understand it! - Unless that makes me weird? lol. This line was especially good:

Word by word, a sentence gives.

Just made perfect sense to me!

I look forward to seeing more of your work hun! Keep at it, you have talent!

xxx

U have such talent another exellent poem. Checkout some of mine but don't expect much. I will had u to my favorites I love ur poems!

wow!! wickedly good stuff

Nice One.
I Enjoyed The Meaning Behind it.

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Very true and to the point. I liked it and the meaning that went with it thankz for commenting on my poem