David,
Again, I am overly impressed...your love poems are brilliant-5

with love,
Heather

"Yesterday has crumbled tomorrow is today
Just follow your heart let love lead the way
Well reach for the stars and swallow the sun
Cherish the moment when our time has come"

This stanza is one of the best I've ever read! Don't get me wrong, the entire piece is pure literary brilliance, but I am in love with this stanza! Great job as always, I look forward to reading more~Holly

~ nice poem, david. write on :)
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Just so you're perfectly aware I'll be harassing your poems from now on... Your poems are binding... The meter is perfect, the word choice and rhyme is exquisite...wow I'm blown away... It seems I've got reading to do ~ keep writing, for all our sakes ~