wow, you just described my life and the day I tried to commit suicide....Amazing poem, it really spoke to my heart and brought me back to that day a month ago!!!

I love this poem because this is so popular in the world today, and not many people want to talk about it, and you did!I l think it's a nice poem.

thats cool but sad, i hope u knwo u don't have to do this dont' be afraid to speak up xox sam
p.s. ur now in my favourites ur just to good lol :P

wow your style and flow is wicked! makes me want to read alot more.
5/5 for sure
xox bam

really liked this poem, the rhyming's fab and the poem itself really built up a lot of emotion, keep it up! il have to check out more of ya stuf

take care always, lu -x-x-x-

wow that blew me away thats really greate scary but greate good work!!