Wow, that was original and unique. I truly liked it a lot! Great one!

~Sierra

Very epic depiction of what happens. It is a really good poem and i liked how you used in your or on your for the metaphores. They are really nice and i am glad that you could choose something that we all know and we all can see, i know that there is a lot of things that are great in the world.

Five/Five

P.S. thank you for your comment on my poem, I am not dating at the moment. i don't know if something happens perhaps i will date, as of right now i am just content with being myself..i am tired of women thinking the world revovles around them.

Cool poem, I liked it :-)

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