Exellent job I think u should write more and post them! Check out some of mine if u would Thanx!

wow mindblowing..ur metaphors are delightful
congratulations on a job well done

This is a great poem and your talent is very noticeable. Good Job! 5/5. Love Emma xxx

Wow, thanks for your comments. What can I say, I sure didn't expect my poem to be seen like this. I am not a writer, nor I don't want to become one. I just wrote a few poems for the girl I love, and made one public :)
I might start writing more (I write them in less then an hour, but sadly I don't have time for this) and as soon as one is finished, I'll post it.
Again, thank you!
Your sincerely,
Antonio S.

I liked it, especially how the number of lines in the stanzas alternated between 4 and 5 and then 6 at the end. I definetly agree that you need to write more!

Wow, a very well written, readable poem, really enjoyable, I liked the style of the poem and it was great, well done 5

~ excellent poem my friend! gr8 one
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Obviously full of emotion, although I don't think I like this one as much as the other poem you've written. I thought the rhyme scheme was too predictable and a little forced and randomly placed. But I'm sure Adina is lucky to have such a wonderful lover. Keep writing.

this is really beautiful too! you are so very talented! keep writing! post more and i will definitely read em! 5/5