This boardered on abit too over dramatic for me. The thing that kinda killed it was you just said you loved this guy but you never showed any exsamples how am I suppose to feel your pain when you don't show it to mean I am sorry its just the way it sound maybe next time...

Veldig veldig bra skrevet...

Sykt trist da..men jättebra!!!=)

rock on:=)

Very well expressed and conveyed.

omg! that was really good! thanx for sharing it!
luv always,
Ashli

there is so much emotion in this poem, i really love ur work. I've added u to my favourites, so dont stop writing!

Fantastic poem once again, really thought provoking and sad to read, brought tears to my eyes, well done