wow thats a great poem i loved it keep it up-krystal

twas an amazin poem keep ya head up tho n fanks for da comment on my poem 'run away' fanks xxxxxxxx

wow great poem! i like it alot! thanx for the comment on mine! ill give this 1 5/5

much love
xXSavannahXx

VERY TOUCHING AND SAD...BUT WELL WRITTEN..GOOD LUCK DOREEN 5/5

I can feel the blood leaving my veins???? instead of wains....
just a thought...Doreen

wow... very sad..... I hope you dont really feel like this..... good write though... -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Sad and you really got your emotions out in this one!!! I totally feel your pain, there is nothing worse that your boyfriend leaving you for another!!! Hope that you are ok??? If you need to talk please email me!!!

HUGS from me, Sabrina

WOW SOOOOOOO POWERFUL OMG OMG I LOVE IT i am printing it and putting it on my wall! LOVED IT!!!!!1 xxxxxxx

very powerful and heartfelt- good job!
although, some of the rhymes were a bit forced you could tell that you really cared and your poem showed your emotion reall well! keep it up...

great writing.5/5
love,
~Katie~

Funny ... my ex was named Mark as well, and to be honest he ripped my world apart. I still have not pieced it all back together.

Good job on expressing the feelings here. I understood every emotion that went into the words you wrote.

--Sher

Oh so sad but again excellent! Keep smiling and i'll try read some more soon :)

Wow i loved that poem.... Beautiful and sad.... sometimes people don't understand how even if someone hurts you like this how you can still love them, well i understand.... Be strong and i'm here if you wanna talk.
Tash
xoxox
p.s maybe you can read my poem She said "Tell me another lie." it's also about abuse.

oh and 1 suggestion for this line,
*Then my whole world turned dark and blue*
I think you should say *black and blue*, just a thought:)

wow.. i loved it..a five!

hey.... i loved it!!! i liked the way u made it ryme.....keep it up!!! 5/5
-amanda

Very well done a sad poem but definitly a well written one and a 5/5

Aww thats really good and sad! It had a lot of emotion in it. Keep up the great writing!!
Thanks for your comment on my poem :)

really good poem it slows nicely 5/5

I really like this one. However, judging from your writing...it isnt your best. You and i both know you can do better, and bring your poetry to a whole new level. Excellence is hidden.
~Hina

Great poem again... it's so deep. 5/5 Keep it up!

~ Tina