long!! is it like a story poem? what were you thinking when you wrote this? i would like to know.. interesting.. your opinion would be great while im writing a book.. thanks

i see everyone is voting you low.. but all the long hard work...lol... i give you a 5

this is mad good for a guy i like it 5/5

you have talent..wonder full.
much love..
shannon

i liked this altho i think u ned to check for a few spelling mistakes lol i thought it was a good poem.xxx

David it's truly sensational.I can truly relate to it.Honestly I can.

That was excellent, my eyes are red. I don't see how anyone can rate this anything but a 5... amazing. Great job here.

Oh, by the way, check out my poem "Everything Is," I think you'd like it.

Excellent job. I once felt like that. I am running out of words to say about your stunning work. keep it up. you are on my favs now. xxx

I loved this poem. It showed a lot of emotion and it was written beautifully. The rhyming was also very even. xX