A 5 u are very good. Exellent job!

i love ur style of writing and da metaphors used
nice work

Very Great =) 5/5 for this one!
Keep up the good work.. thanx for your comments on my poems really meant a lot.. Take Care

greatness
byes and laters,
brandy

Whoaaaa. Amazing poem munchkin. Wasn't expecting anything like that, though I'm not sure what I was expecting so.. Yeah, I hope everything's okay chickadee! My address is on my profile if you ever want to talk :)
Take good care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

*5/5*

5/5 wonderful word choice. i hope i could chose words like you did in this poem.

thanks for commenting on my poem. means alot to me.