I like the first two stanzas, not so much the last 2 so i'll give u a 4/5...lovin the creativity...sheesh, i'm in envy! :)

with love,
Heather

cute

cute xx.kellbell

Really Funny lol...Keep up the great work...

nice poem,

DAMN...do his head gotta be empty..can't it jus be big?
lol