Nicely written .. I like how you lay the foundation to draw the reader in before leading them to salvation. Very nice...

--Sher

I love your poems...

That's all I have to say.

I like this piece a lot, very thought provoking, beautiful Eirisa!

with love,
Heather

:-o!! WOW! God Almighty Eirisa that was absolutley beautiful!! These poems your coming up with are amazing!!..i really like that saying also.."lifes little equation"..not only is it creative but its so very true ya know? This was p-e-r-f-e-c-t!! I loved every line!! Great choice of words and another wonderfully written peice by my big sis!! Do keep it up..im always your fan!
Love always,
~Chelsey~

I don't mean to be rude but i was a little upset by the message you left on my poem about it not being my work. I thought of that from the top of my head and maybe you got it wrong :(

Well Amanda there must be some truth to my claim of your poem "Invisble Gift" being true because you have erased my comment which clearly stated and explained my reasons for believing your poem was plagerised...

I DO'NT copy any of my work. I am sorry you clearly do not like me, if this is the case please do not leave comments on my work because it is quite upsetting for me. I only came on this website to share my thoughts and feelings with people. If i copied my poem i must have psychic powers as i have never seen it in my life before. I am a friendly person who gets upset easily so please don't bee nasty to me cos i am not nasty to anyone! I erased the poem because i don't want nasty comments on it. When i visit Australia in the summer i will look for this poem in a box. By the way you are a great poet :)

Maybe if you said 'is it copied'? and believed me when i said 'no' instead of 'it IS copied'! then i wouldn't be so upset (as in crying) I am still adding you to my favourites though coz i like your poems. Can we be friends? Can we put it behind us? I have deleted the poem cos i don't want any more trouble about it. :(

~ excellent poem, i guess this is my first comment on ur poems, i should check out more from you, and i definitely will! :)
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit