This is written beautifully! So heartfelt and packed with emotion! Keep it up~Holly

great poem, i love it!! great job keep it up! PLP

~lil slam~

That was wonderful, I only hope he reads it. I just have one question on this line:

"Every step you where to take"

Is it supposed to be were instead of where? I don't know if I'm just being dumb or not but that doesn't make sense to me...

But anyways that was wonderful and he is very lucky to have a friend like you.

really good i gave u 5/5

wonderful poem!

Oh wow Heather this is a fantastic piece, I could relate to it on many levels, well written and an excellent choice of words - keep it up
=Eirisa=

~ excellent poem this one too! very well written, neat write :)
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Awesome. Great job.

Thank you very much heather, i am so happy to be thought of in such a manner, but not everyone will know what this means. But it means a lot to me that you have wrote the poem about me.

Perhaps soon you will be putting it up in the love section of the poems *nudge* haha.

Love ya Lots,
Shaun.