hehe great poem! Thanks for all the comments on mine!:o) Excellent writting here..Keep it up! 5outta5
Shannon

i like it!

Beautiful poem...loved it reading...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

Vicky, I must confess this is most amazing. I love your line of thought and the following lines made a great impression.
"Who needs prophecies telling us about destruction?
When our life helps this world function"

I was thinking if you can make this "From the smallest creature to the cities we have built" line read thus: From the smallest creature to the sky crappers" i dont know if you think same, i love the feel of skycrappers, a good descript and painting our creation.

~ excellent poem victoria, amazing write, write on :)
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Excellent job and beautifully written. hugs, lol, *Ann*

Hey, thanks for the comment. It meant a lot.

Great poem hun. You wrote it very well. :-)

God bless! <3

hey gret poem....awesome i love it...u know, i haven't notice untill now but, this poem is kinda the same as mine, "Questions of life" i think so....well later and take care girl....

hollabackgirl

I loved this just as I loved your other
poems. this is brilliant. what other thing can I say?
take care,
marjan