Very good poem. Congrats!
5/5 from me :)

Upsetting, how can this have a 3.0, defenant 5, I loved it and I'm looking forward to part 2...I love dark things like this!!

with love,
Heather

ps. ahh thank you for the spelling correction, didn't notice that, you were right :)

nice one!
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Well done I especiaaly liked this section
"Dark tranquility as death becomes
Abandonment at the inevitable end
Heart beats fuse with beats of drums
Drumheads wear thin at every bend"
Very good poem, extremely well written and a good use of words well done

Dark and beautiful. I loved it. Nothing else to say. Keep on writing poems like this one, i will read them for sure if you just tell me when youve written them. 5/5 for sure.
SatuzKa

This is a well written poem and I really like it. Good Job! Love Emma xxx

Also 5/5

You've got a nice way with words....I especially liked the ending. Looking forward to the follow up!