Great poem! :)

Awesome job! you really have talent. Keep it up!
-J-

Hi Abbie...Good Poem..keep writing...I hope everything gets better for you....

Telling and emotional. You manifest well anger, fear, chaos as you sweep the reader through your experience. Excellent poem.

loved it! you know how to take a readers emotions and make it happen! keep it up!
lexi lou

the poem kept me in suspense