wow dude, that is a good poem, i like it lots, you def had a good style of writing. well keep up the good work aite.

and it's been a while.

i like this one a lot. hell, i like all your poems. their different from everyone elses and real detailed.
great job.

- andriana

That was really good....great job keep up the good work~JJ

Damn.. Nice write. Gives a vivid picture. Peace yo.
-Armed-Alcoholic

nice poem
KT xx

~this poem is really good keep up this kind of writing hehe~

really good. definitely in the right category...dark lol. it's really well-written tho. good job. 5/5

This is a very original poem and I really liked it. Please comment back.

This is a very original poem and I really liked it. Please comment back.

that's deep.

ME SO HORNY!
Haha j/k. It's cool. Keep up the dark writting!

ME SO HORNY!
Haha j/k. It's cool. Keep up the dark writting!

Mister, your writing is the shiz.
Like it muchly.
-Laura.
.x.