the feeling and emotion u feel when u read ur poems are what makes them so good. I love reading poems that I can feel and sometime relate to!

That was simply beautiful... and yes, emotional. Treasured childhood with a dark, but completely comprehensible twist. Quite wonderful, Amilo.

amilo it was awesome u depict life so beautifully in words.
take care

--chavii--

I really liked it. I have to admit though the title through me off alot. I thought it was going to be a simple stated poem considering the title was blunt and sounded too direct, but I was proven wrong after reading the piece.
Your symbols were lovely and really drew the reader into the atmosphere of which you set for the piece.
the main idea was creative and meaningful, and the way you wrote it related many readers if not all to the transformation of a child when growing up.
i especially admired the lines where you displayed the abandonment of childhood and the change which follows.
Excellent read

I liked the way you made childhood a person, and everything else....wonderfull:)

this poem is brilliant. beautiful job [and for once, I actually mean it when I comment like this]. 5/5.

the poem flowed beautifully