This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. It mad me cry. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over him just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem

WOW! I like dis poem Amanda. Heres a 5! =)

I loved how this poem had a great flow and how everything went together. Oh and in the 3rd stanza is says "And getting what want" I think you forgot to put an "I" there. Great poem, well done.

I really like it.
Sad how guys can pretty much take over us all the time. Make us anxious and all.
5/5
--Tania:)