wow..soooo goood! 5/5 you are amazing keep it up!

much love shannon

Outstanding!!! Wow! I guess I'm going to have to add you to my favorites now. I just love the way you write!

This is just a spell-binding poem. This is your poem, written with your talent and you deserve so much more out of it. Just know what a masterpiece it is.

~rolo

THE FATE OF A DREAMER IS THE FATE OF ONE WHOM STRUGGLES THROUGH AND STILL HAS FAITH! 5/5

This is a wonderful write EOB, but then, wonderful writes are what I expect from you, Superlative, Bravo!!!

Breathtakingly beautiful and sad.....

I loved someone truly, whose heart was named mine
And within those I saw countless stars shine.
But one day she left me, my beloved redeemer,
that, my dear friend, is the fate of a dreamer.

^....and yet we dream.....this poem affected me on a very deep level.....