Comments : * mY tOrMeNtOr *

  • 19 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    this is a wonderful write. i was rather excited, u hadnt written in a while, and then this! its great! it sort of reminds me of MCR (my chemical romance) and of few of their songs. u definately have talent! keep up the great work! and stay safe, strng, and healthy!
    AntiSocial16
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Elynnka

    another good one:)...keep it up!! 5/5

  • the line "bella muerte" i thought, meant "beautiful death" in spanish, but i think it could also have been in italian or something... either way, i could see how it would make someone remember MCR... i was listening to it when i wrote this poem. No lyrics were stolen! ^-^

    -rissy (lol)

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Great poem