wow, that was awesome! I must admit I read it, got to unwritten rules, rolled my eyes and thought... well I won't say... but then I read on and it just twisted beautifully, last line's a perfect finish, great work.

emma x

wow this is really good. i love the way u contrast the love tht feels good and the love that doesnt, very clever and rly original i havent red many poems tht contrast. very very affective and great writing, keep it up!! xx

i enjoyed this one

so true! I've been to both extremes and can feel what you're talking about. Good job.

love poems are extremely hard to write and accomplish; myself, I dont write them for this purpose. Good job on this, though.
"feeling there warmth on my lips"
there needs to be THEIR....=)

well done this poem was really gud i think weve all had dat feeling 1 minute an anofa th nxt! Congrats on a gr8 poem! xxx

I like it! i liked how you used a different style, i think it makes your poem different than all the other love poems out there. I also like how you've added both sides to love and i particularily like your last line, it sums it up very well. good job

its a cute poem that shows both sides. really gd!! keep it up!!
sarah
xxxx

I love it im on the second half of love right now tho