i really enjoyed reading this. you should get this published..
tell me about this poem. who was this toward?

wow, i'm not a big fan of angel poems, but this one is excellent 5/5. Keep it up.

luv it. keep it up~!! wondeful word choice~!!~

thanks for reading my poems. it means a lot to me. thanks again~!!~

awww i really enjoyed that was a beautiful message and loved the references to eyes. the only critisism i would have was that i couldnt work out whether it rhymed or not? hope ur okay and dont mine me saying.hope u return the favour
xxxLoUxxx

not too bad, i can really relate to this because my grandpa just passed away yesterday. stay strong

Omg girl, this is such a beautyful poem! i'm crying here! haha *wipes her eyes* it really was touching!

Gorgeous poem...it may not rhyme but I think that it doesn't need to...it sounds excellent as it is ^^
-Redd

awww, that was sooo sad! it almost made me cry! it was still good though.
p.s- please rate mine

Very sad poem! Very well written! I wrote a poem for my grandpa when he passed away Christmas in Heaven. If u would like check it out for me! Thanx and Take Care!

That was so touching. The last lines were especially beautiful...it almost made me cry. I can really relate to this poem because when my loved one died this is how i felt. Very touching, keep on writing and take care.
SatuzKa

I truly like this

Excellent write, very well done~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

wow i love this.. 5/5

Very good poem. Thanks for your comments :)