You made me cry. please don't go. I like to read your poems. I got some more poems for you to read :)

Wow, very good poem, I love reading your work it is amazing. Well done

Are you ok?

~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

its awesome sabrina realy sad n powerful its surprising but i wrote 2day "my last goodbye " too.find time 2 check it .

--chavii--

I really appreciated the comment you left. if i ever feel that way again i'll let you know. Thankyou for all your support. You really are one of a million :)

5/5 i really like how you express yourself through your poetry. Check out my poem called questions, see if you can relate like i did with yours. much love, johnny

nice poem!! keep it up!! you have lots of talent!! :) take care.

Hold on, be strong God is always there. Great write!! -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

OH wow..tears were in my eyes. It had feeling..lots of feeling. Keep it up

so sad.. but i liked it a lot! 5/5
keep up the good work..!
thanks for your comments

awww so sad and i like how it sort of pleads with god, really nice! well done please check out my work if u have the time! thanks and take care
xxxLoUxxx

You have a talent, although that word is overused by many people on this site.

Not your best, but better than most.

It was a great poem and you really did a great job. STill be strong. It was well written and it flows very well. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

Can u plz read my poem My Story thanks!!!=)