Know that feeling all to well. Like ur choice of words! Take Care!

Yes, like Brooke I know that feeling very well too. You picked your words well and it was a simple poem yet the meaning was somehow deep. I like it. Take care,
Satuxxa

Very unique poem.

I like this poem...short, but sweet. Very expressive....sometimes I feel like this, and I can connect. Being able to connect with your readers is VERY important.

thank you for the comments. they mean soo much to me

much love,
dawn

Good job, try to be less repetitive.

Thats sad : ( I have felt this way many times. Great writing, I'm loving your poems

I read this and loved it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

A fine and sad poem, the doubt in the last line is touching.

Aw, This is sad, Yet really good. Lovin' the short verses and has a good point in it! Keep it up =]

luv natz x0x